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December 13, 2008
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Have you ever noticed how if you take the "o" out of "doing", it's ding, and if you take out the "i", it's dong?
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In a Afterlife, I'll met someone who died heroically, when they ask me for my story, i'll say "I died laughing at pudding"
Please note I have a dirty mind, anything you say will be used pervertly
I'm having a contest! Note me for info!
(As for the grammar mistake, I think you may have skipped a word. "I thought I had gotten used to him [etc]" It's just a small thing. XD)
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"Art is something that endures the test of time beautifully and gracefully. What's the point of something that disappears as soon as its born? True beauty lies in things that last forever, never rotting or fading."
<3 *truth*
I would only move the SHUTUP panel a bit.
Everything is perfect. :]
But it would have more oomph if it was it's own slightly bigger panel maybe.
But your art and angles and shading and dialouge are all top notch.
I love it. <3
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My memory's not as sharp as it used to be. Also, my memory's not as sharp as it used to be.
I'd check the grammar, as it looks like someone's already pointed out, and as someone else already also pointed out, move the 'shut up' panel just a bit.
And I'm not sure if it was deliberate or not, but the bottom right panel isn't lined evenly with the bottom left.
Other than that stuff, I love your art so much.
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|S|A|S|U|x|N|A|R|U|--My Anti-Drug.
Château du perdu!
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Wanna be featured? [link]
But dang.. otherwise, very nice.^.^
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