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D Gray man: ER DOUJIN PAGE? by ~Mikutashi:iconMikutashi:


©2008-2009 ~Mikutashi
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random page.

Doujinshi practise.

FIRST POST IN A YEAR OR SOMETHING! WHOAAAZA

CRITICS PLEASE I WANNA IMPROVE

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:iconcat-ninja:
Awesome!! I love the first panel! :heart:

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Have you ever noticed how if you take the "o" out of "doing", it's ding, and if you take out the "i", it's dong?
:iconanimechick17:
:thumbsup: i like it ^^

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:iconpeachykeen727:
The only big mistake I noticed was a grammar issue. :O I also was thinking that Allen's eyes were a tad too small in the bottom right panel. Otherwise it's beautiful work, as always.

(As for the grammar mistake, I think you may have skipped a word. "I thought I had gotten used to him [etc]" It's just a small thing. XD)

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:iconparkinlot:
Truly, HONESTLY!

I would only move the SHUTUP panel a bit.
Everything is perfect. :]

But it would have more oomph if it was it's own slightly bigger panel maybe.

But your art and angles and shading and dialouge are all top notch.

I love it. <3
:iconmikutashi:
bahah, yes I have trouble with grammer at times. Ok grammer, got it.
:iconmikutashi:
bigger shut up panel, thanks 8D hahah
:iconlalalaanime:
....you're alive!

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:iconalexyoshida:
Hmm...I'll critique, since you asked.
I'd check the grammar, as it looks like someone's already pointed out, and as someone else already also pointed out, move the 'shut up' panel just a bit.
And I'm not sure if it was deliberate or not, but the bottom right panel isn't lined evenly with the bottom left.
Other than that stuff, I love your art so much. :iconiloveitplz:

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:iconviolet-grubs:
really good! Definitely captured the emotion

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:iconvillail:
Not sure if its critique, but the first panel with his hand. I feel like the fingers should be opened a bit more to make it look like he's grabbing his whole head. Not just a that little section of his head/forehead area.
But dang.. otherwise, very nice.^.^

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